8. Revising.
Revisando.
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Read you draft.
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Mark the areas that need correction.
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Read the draft to your partner and notice this out:
c
Does the description paint a picture in your mind?
c
What details interested you? Should details be added?
c
Each paragraph keep to the main idea?
c
Should some details be taken out or moved around?
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Make changes. Use your partner’s comments to improve your paper.
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Correct and edit.
c
Did I capitalize the first letter of the proper nouns?
c
Did I begin titles and initials with capital letters?
c
Did I misspell some words? Look for the correct spelling in a
dictionary.
c
Are the apostrophes in the correct position?
9. Make a final copy.
Elabora la copia final.
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Include all the revisions you have made.
10. Publishing.
Publicando.
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Get two pieces of construction paper and glue.
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Glue your description on one sheet of construction paper.
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Glue the photo or drawing of your subject on the other sheet.
Sandra L
opez is a girl that is studying
secondary in G
uanajuato.
Sandra has brown eyes, blond hair,
she is slim and tall. She is very
beautiful, she is always smiling.
Sandra is writing a tall tale about
animals. She is a very good writter.
Sandra’s family loves her because she
is very sweet and lovely.
She is always helping poor people to
prepare themselves at school.
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